Thursday, August 2, 2018

My dino park writing task

It started one stormy night when Evie was fidgeting around in bed having  a nightmare then suddenly she woke up and she was in a different place. She wasn't at home in her nice warm bed she was with different people and different pets , they were dinosaurs ! ! !


She was taken out from the grassy spot  where she woke up and spat on. Blerck she thought as the slime trickled down her face. She looked over and gazed up to a monstrous I . REX  named Gravel ( she noticed his dino bowl with his name on it!) The slime was everywhere.


EVie was thrown to the mucky Water hole and chased after by Gravel.  then lickd by him . After Gravel licked evie after that a mosasaurus came over “ Raaaaaaaaaaaa Rrrrrrrrrrrrr Hhhhhhhh’’ said the mosasaurus that means do you have a bean . ( beans are humans ) . Ahhhhhhhh ( That means no i don’t ) . Then they started to fight , ¨ here comes the park keeper to stop us fighting´´  , ¨ STOP ! ´´ yelled the park keeper from the feed room.


¨ hey kid come to the gate and tell me how and why you got here ´´ said the park keeper bringing out Gravel and  Relfś food for them to tear up and eat. ¨ so how did you get here in the first place kid did you walk away from home or get kicked out of youŕe house ? . . . . ´´ Said the park keeper but before she could say anything else Evie said ¨ i was taken to here and thrown into the water hole by you´re crazy dinosaur named Gravel , then He and Ralph started fighting and


nearly knocked me of my feet ´´ Said Evie “ what in the world is that ? ’’ she asked that park keeper “ that my dear is Ralph and Gravel’s food ’’ she said as she let Evie out of the paddock “ Mahmhmhmhhmhmhmh ’’ “ oh no pandie is hungry better give her some food ’’ said the park keeper

“ woof woof ’’ said snuffles the park keepers dog “ oh shoot i forgot to feed my


dog snuffles ’’ said the park keeper in a crazy voice “ hey kid can pass me the dog food please ? ’’ said the park keeper  “ ahhhh ok ok ’’ said evie in a scared voice

“ hhhhhhhhhh how do i get home ? ’’ said evie shivering with fear “ kid i asked you something do it and i will help you ok ? ’’  “ yes mam ’’ said evie trying not to cry but tears came speeding down her beautiful face “ you ok kid


and also can you hurry up the more time you waste here the less time we can find you you’re home ’’ “ yes mam ’’ said evie “ girl i think you can call me jess who are you ? ’’ “ i’m evie ’’ said evie “ nice to meet you evie ’’ “ you too jess , i’ll go and get the dog food for you ’’ said evie trying to be strong “ woof woof woof woof ’’
Snuffles yelled from his cage

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